This is my 38th week in my mother's womb. I am too excited to see the outer world... to experience the first breath....to feel the fresh air..... to see the world around....
Mom is also excited but she is frightened too....a typical delirium... she says that I have started moving tempestuously..... she can feel my hiccups too.... I am practicing breathing and blinking ;-)
My organs are fully developed now and the skin has started turning pink. My toenails and fingernails have grown to the tips of toes and fingers and my muscles are getting stronger too... Mom is feeling extremely uncomfortable and clumsier and is hurriedly packing her bags for the week long hospital detainment....
I am getting ready too... preparing to bid adieu to my 38 week old shelter... to become free from the armour.... but suddenly something started perturbing me.... i am going to miss this place.... I am going to miss the warmth of this adorable abode.... I am going to miss the lovely music vibrating inside.....reverberated by mom's unending love for the unseen piece of her own bod.....
I want to cry out aloud.... begging her to keep me inside.... to bask in the warmth of her womb and to relish the aeonian music......
Tree of Life
7 years ago
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Amuzing. When read closely feels like things are really happening now. "Mother" is the only warm, safe and caring place for each and every individual in all this world.
Mmm....feel so good reading it and an unmatched comfort !!!
Hurray!!!!!! Two more weeks to go for the real Cry..........:)
So the N@ughty BoY is all set to enter into ReAl World.....
Very sweeet and touching naration........
Well said man, I felt it when I read it......You are improvising by the day.....
"One day we will hear about a good writer friend,fame will be at ur door steps."It has been my wish and all those u know u ..AMAZING,keep writing,my wish is too near now.Every part comes from ur heart.............
thank u dear friends..... thank u very much for ur comments..... its really encouraging.....!!!!!
hello,
"music in de womb"
i must say truly.. great explanation..wondering these many thingz happen inside.. nd really.. good that...a piece of onself is modulated inside... nd how that lump of flesh gathers life.. eagerly waitng to jump out of itz cacoon.. nd spread wide itz cool.. wingz nd "fly" nice imagination.. nice explanation.. GO O D W O R k
keep up..waiting more
regardz,
sharmi
I agree with Kris. Our BDM turned writer improves day by day !!
Keep going, Sjueeth...
I have always believed that my birth (or birth in general) was by chance, born by chance never by choice, but you seem to be pushing the idea of born by choice not by chance, chose to be born. I m confused!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reading ur comment even i am confused.........
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