Saturday, September 13, 2008

Nine minutes

I felt like in heaven, when you were near me,
your hand over mine and legs across mine....
I took you in my arms and you never said no,
you gave me your lips and I kissed it with love....
I held your hips and pulled you towards me,
I felt your heart beats beating against mine,
I felt the warmth of your breath and
your breast never tried to be free from me....
The taste of your ears became mine,
your hair tangled with my beard and chest....
and it seemed you were counting my heart beats....
It was not long when that moment came,
with a heavenly jerk I was deep inside you......
measuring the unfathomable depth of your juciy inside..
and before I could say I love you,
it was all over and I was resting
on your beautiful self
counting your innumerable sighs........!!!!!!

8 comments:

Biju Mathews said...

I'm impressed!! I didn't know that you were so bold to think aloud. keep it up and let loose the reins of imaginations and let not society lock your keyboards..

Kris said...

Bahut hi bhavuk vivaran hai. well written.....nostalgia :-(

Reji said...

OOPS!

Anand aka AVen said...

:D i think, it would be of the best interest of the society, to keep those who are under 18 away from this posting. :D

soo said...

Ohh...buddyyy.....reading this, I realize that ....I've miles to go before I sleep......

Satish said...

I really like this one... The words are so well put together... and has all the beauty of true love....

Cheers!!!

Anish said...

am not gettin any words to reply...

euphonical said...

thank u friends.......... i never thought that you all will comment on this ...... this is really encouraging.... thanks once again...... ;-)